i was walking to this big big castle.I heard a horse galloping and a plane going to crash and I could smell plane engine oil. I could smell flowers and food and I could smell the horrible dirt and there's rock in the sand with dirt everywhere.i could hear a plane engine and a dragon flapping his gigantic wings and singing and annoying bugs and of course wind.i can touch sandboxes the mountains the dragons there was heaps of boxesThursday, August 13, 2020
my big castle-_-
i was walking to this big big castle.I heard a horse galloping and a plane going to crash and I could smell plane engine oil. I could smell flowers and food and I could smell the horrible dirt and there's rock in the sand with dirt everywhere.i could hear a plane engine and a dragon flapping his gigantic wings and singing and annoying bugs and of course wind.i can touch sandboxes the mountains the dragons there was heaps of boxes
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hi blake i like your picture and the front that you use
ReplyDeleteHi Blake its Devon and i very liked your writing about the castle im doing something similar its a different photo it the cave one maybe next time make all the words the same because it was quite hard to read but everything else was good😇
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